In that very moment,
You caught my hollow sight,
On that gloomy day,
You shone down a light,
I felt cold that time,
I felt hot at the same time,
When you’re there the winds blow,
When you’re gone grey skies show,
The trees all standing tall,
They’re looking down at us all,
I stare you from a deserted corner,
Watching your every moves ignoring others,
Waiting anxiously for a miracle,
A miracle that’ll do us together,
I knew that that would never happen,
As I know I wasn’t meant for you,
I watch you each day,
You took my life away,
I’ve no reason to live,
You’ve made my eyes tear,
My heart’s punctured,
You stabbed it with your words,
Words that I never had expected,
But I liked it though, I loved it,
My time’s up, our time’s up,
All friends and enemies are gone,
You too- gone with heavenly breeze,
I’m hoping to see you again,
May that day comes fast, n faster…
i'm still waiting...
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SplitFire7 - Fresh Meat
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RE: i'm still waiting...
I couldn't tell what the rhyming scheme was, if any, but regardless, it was good. Very well done.
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ZRC - I GHALUKDADOUCHE PA...*cough*
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