My little world.
Torn by deceit.
Burned by hatred.
Diminished by love.
But yet my soul jumps.
At the very sight of you.
So very wicked.
So very wretched.
What’s this hold?
You have on me?
Stinging Pain.
At The thought of your goodbye.
How you leave me alone.
Crying till the mildew comes.
Dreaming of how you smell.
Reminiscing on the taste.
The taste that lives on your lips.
I see your perfect face.
So perfectly unperfect.
But yet again.
So very wicked.
So very wretched.
And still.
I can’t seem to get over you.
Im scared.
And I think I’ll never stop crying.
i cant stop crying
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emovalcore - Emo Kid
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- Location: someday in finland
by Gingerbread Coffin on 11-18-2007 3:28 pm
*sobs* stop making me cry!!!!! That was awesomeness...
Goodbye losers and fuckers, and steady bad luckers, and epitomes of sodomy and wealth.
Blood stained sheets, in the shape of your heart, this is where it starts, this is where it will end...
I hate you. I'll always hate you. But yet I still fuck you under the table with a wine bottle...
Blood stained sheets, in the shape of your heart, this is where it starts, this is where it will end...
I hate you. I'll always hate you. But yet I still fuck you under the table with a wine bottle...
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Gingerbread Coffin - emoXcore
- Posts: 430
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- Age: 14
- Location: sheffield, England
by bleedsxXxnoxXxmore on 11-18-2007 10:55 pm
this is amazing
it perfectly describes the situation I'm in now
it perfectly describes the situation I'm in now
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bleedsxXxnoxXxmore - emoXcore
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- Age: 15
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by deathfairy on 11-19-2007 7:09 am
Same!...You just described exactly what I am feeling at the moment. You made me wana cry even more
eat this sh!t
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deathfairy - Registered
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- Age: 16
- Gender: Female
- Location: South Africa
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InsomniacsRequiem - Emo Kid
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- Location: california
by cheeky maw on 11-19-2007 11:06 am
really good ( doubt you wrote it)
18/09/93 Thats all got gets from me .
Fuck your system
Fuck your rule
i am the minority within a minority
you are the sheep
i am the shepard
Fuck your system
Fuck your rule
i am the minority within a minority
you are the sheep
i am the shepard
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cheeky maw - Emo Kid
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- Age: 15
- Gender: Female
- Location: england
by emovalcore on 11-19-2007 11:22 am
i am good at qritng peoms qabout hate and sadnesscheeky maw wrote: really good ( doubt you wrote it)
i would die for you
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emovalcore - Emo Kid
- Posts: 200
- Joined: 09 Aug 2007
- Age: 14
- Gender: Male
- Location: someday in finland
by xlastxresortx on 11-19-2007 12:41 pm
Thats really good.
Interviewer: What happened when you kissed Frank?
Gerard: Magic. Fireworks.
Frank: *giggles*
Gerard: Magic. Fireworks.
Frank: *giggles*
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xlastxresortx - Almost Emo
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- Joined: 17 Nov 2007
- Gender: Female
- Location: My mind, fantasizing about My Chemical Romance
by emovalcore on 11-24-2007 3:03 pm
i wrote this becuase i heart was broken so many times beforeSinsofSanctuary wrote: *sobs* stop making me cry!!!!! That was awesomeness...
i would die for you
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emovalcore - Emo Kid
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- Age: 14
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- Location: someday in finland
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Rebecca - Almost Emo
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- Joined: 24 Nov 2007
- Gender: Female
- Location: In my mansion
by OhSoEmoxX on 11-25-2007 2:05 pm
Awwwwwwww that is so sad, I hope you feel better
*cries*
XxX
*cries*
XxX
So deep that I didn't even scream XxX
Don't pour custard on my head!!!!
XxCaptain Obvious, pointing out the obvious things that are left out by othersxX
<3 Adam <3
Don't pour custard on my head!!!!
XxCaptain Obvious, pointing out the obvious things that are left out by othersxX
<3 Adam <3
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OhSoEmoxX - Fresh Meat
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- Location: Birmingham
. You brought tears to my eyes.-
EmoTrench <3 - Almost Emo
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- Age: 88
- Location: England
by xXharleyXx on 11-29-2007 8:44 pm
Wow..this is really good. You should write more. I love it! It really describes how Im feeling right now, actually.
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xXharleyXx - Registered
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by blackholeXnoheart on 11-29-2007 9:42 pm
I really like this. You had some good descriptions.
Hate is just heart
Without the R
And the letters all mixed up
Without the R
And the letters all mixed up
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blackholeXnoheart - Almost Emo
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- Joined: 24 Nov 2007
- Age: 17
- Gender: Female
- Location: Land of OZ
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