Before you read this poem. Sorry if I typed some words wrong, I'm dutch so I can't perfectly wright english. Also I'm quite new at wrighting poems so I hope y'all like it ^^ Thanks for reading!
I don’t know how much time this will take
But I know that my dream is not a fake
For it to finally become true
Is when for the first time I will get to see you
No more struggles and no more fear
And all my stress will dissapear
I cannot wait untill that sight
It’s time to fly to you this night
Yet in my dreams, this is again
Where the boy becomes a man
I spread my wings, silver and bright
Take some steps, then take a flight
On the hills where I took off
I started the quest to find my true love
Over the sea and across the shores
Gliding in the air to find my course
Flying over mountains again and again
I’ll make this dream come to an end
I traveled alot to find you
And now I am so close
My arms begin to feel heavy
They are tired, I suppose
I cannot give up
No not tonight
Not untill I can see you with my eyes
Kiss your lips and hold you tight
I cannot give up..
I cannot give up
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I cannot give up
by Soulburn on 02-03-2008 4:56 pm
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by xxdyingdesiresxx on 02-03-2008 7:24 pm
*mouth drops* wooowwwwww that was amazing you should really make it into a song
- Tell me, tell me why the sun is shining out here in jersey,
When you are nowhere near
When you are nowhere near
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by XxblackmyheartxX on 02-03-2008 7:28 pm
geez, dat was better than some of mine, how long did u work on that one?
so take take, everything,leave me,
scrambling, reaching
for something that wasn't,
there in the first place...
scrambling, reaching
for something that wasn't,
there in the first place...
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by all alone on 02-03-2008 8:29 pm
ur english ia amazing along side so is ur poem.
life is death, yet death's a lie , so grab my hand and please don't cry, forever and now i'll stand by your side.
EMO IS MORE THAN A MUSIC GENRE!!!!
cry tears of crimson watch them fall daown my cheeks leaving roses of lavendar where-ever there tracks ended
EMO IS MORE THAN A MUSIC GENRE!!!!
cry tears of crimson watch them fall daown my cheeks leaving roses of lavendar where-ever there tracks ended
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by Ashley on 02-03-2008 11:06 pm
It was beautiful.... I loves it.
Didn't see anything wrong with your english.
I really like it...
"not that it's obvious or anything:)
Anyways it's awesome.
Didn't see anything wrong with your english.
I really like it...
"not that it's obvious or anything:)
Anyways it's awesome.
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by Soulburn on 02-04-2008 5:43 am
Thanks everone for replieing om my poem. I'm glad y'all liked it 
Why thank you ^^ I'm not sure how many time I spend on it. I guess 45-60 minutes xD
XxblackmyheartxX wrote: geez, dat was better than some of mine, how long did u work on that one?
Why thank you ^^ I'm not sure how many time I spend on it. I guess 45-60 minutes xD
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by Ashley on 02-04-2008 6:47 pm
wow!
U sound like me, it takes me forever to write.. but atlest you can come up with something that good in that amount of time.
It sometimes takes me three weeks depending on how emotionaly stable I am...
So that's a pretty good time limit you've got there... I'd love it because it's not dramaticly short, but It's not so.. long you think you won't ever finish. So I invy that talent you have for poetry......
U sound like me, it takes me forever to write.. but atlest you can come up with something that good in that amount of time.
It sometimes takes me three weeks depending on how emotionaly stable I am...
So that's a pretty good time limit you've got there... I'd love it because it's not dramaticly short, but It's not so.. long you think you won't ever finish. So I invy that talent you have for poetry......
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