goingoingone's poems

goingoingone's poems

by xXgoingoingoneXx on 10-07-2008 1:15 pm



Lost Hymn

Lost in this dream of confusion,
About to give up on love,
you question your past and your future,
and you question what you know is above,
~
You look to the reight and left,
Wanting a way out of it all,
Your past is made up of mistakes,
Mistakes that have built up these walls,
~
Your heart has been broken too many times,
All glimmer of hope has been lost,
Everyone can see the pain you go through,
But no one can see what it cost,
~
Trying to forget what has been,
But the memories flood in with the rain,
You're drowning in this world you created,
And nothing is real but this pain

~~~

this is the first poem that i ever wrote. just ran across it. enjoy!

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A simple love

i couldn't find the words to say
so i wrote them down and here they lay
your more precious to me than any soul
how much you mean, you'll never know
i love you more and more each day
far more than words could ever say
so if you love me the way i love you
please tell me that it is true

~~~

Story of you ending life

all these thoughts swirling around
you find yourself lying on the ground
all you want to do is cry
but you find your eyes are just too dry
you end up here everyday
why can't you somehow break away
again you wish you could feel something
or just a world where there was nothing
to live and breathe, but you still suffocate
to be happy once before it's too late
this story never ends, it always goes on
this harsh reality will never be gone
today is over, example of your life
reality is only quiet when you reach for your knife

~~~

An unknown world

A far off place,
Of twisted scenes,
In a daze,
What does it mean,
~
Off to the side,
Hardly there,
A place to hide,
A way to stare,
~
Keep in focus,
See it coming,
Through the forest,
Of an unknown world,
~
A hot flash,
Now it’s freezing,
Make a dash,
Before its leaving,
~
Stand away,
Make it strong,
The end of the day,
It’s been too long,
~
Walk around,
Don’t leave it behind,
Find it there,
In a world unkind,
Listen and hear,
Before it’s gone,
~
Almost in control,
Finished and done,
Don’t let it go,
Now it’s over,
It’s finished now,
Find the cover,
And now ask how.

~~~

the last two i've already posted, but i wanted them on the same thread.

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Caught

Barely there
Not in existence
Why should i care
Nothing left for resistance
~
A dream divine
Beyond all compare
A thought so fine
But just a nightmare
~
Walk away
Past the line
One more day
Make it mine
~
Now come back
If you may
You can not lack
Knowing the right way
~
Never wake up
Almost look back
Always a bluff
Before you crack
~
This is what you wanted
To drink of this cup
You were just daunted
It will never be enough

~~~

Hurt and Confused

Everything I know is crashing away,
I just want to run from it all,
But all that i see reminds me of it every day,
Why does it seem everywhere i turn it's just farther i fall?
~
I want to break away, to start all over again,
But every step i take i go ever farther in,
In this endless pain i don't even remember when it began,
This deep, deep turmoil always hidden within

~~~

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by KittensKill on 10-13-2008 7:51 am

They're not bad, although, at times the rhyming seems a little forced.

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by xXgoingoingoneXx on 10-13-2008 7:59 am

ok. thanks

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by emobec on 10-13-2008 8:20 am

there awsome

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by xxxbrittanyxxx on 10-13-2008 10:46 am

OmG I love them all
You should write more =]]

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by PunkRockAngel4Life on 10-13-2008 11:18 am

xxxbrittanyxxx wrote: OmG I love them all
You should write more =]]

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by cloudedbubbles on 10-13-2008 1:52 pm

yay! it was so close to the top! awesome, those are very cool. i loved the first one (was it written for someone in particular?), and even though i don't necessarily understand the others they are very cool. they flow very well.

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by N on 10-13-2008 2:49 pm

Smile they are acctually really good XD

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by shadowslight on 10-19-2008 11:05 am

Hey Smile these are pretty good. You got skills...Keep it up...Hope to see some more

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by xXgoingoingoneXx on 10-20-2008 12:07 pm

thanks!

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by savingrain on 04-22-2009 3:09 pm

really nice. i like them!

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