Everything....PLzz tell me what you think...

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Everything....PLzz tell me what you think...

by emochikk on 12-11-2007 2:17 pm

Every line,
Shows how many times I've told myself I'm fine,
Every scar,
Shows how many times I've gone too far,
Every tear,
Shows how many times I've had fears,
Every lie,
Shows how many times I've wanted to die,
Every kiss,
Shows how many times my world's in a bliss,
Every memory,
Shows how many times I've put my life in jeoprady,
Every song,
Shows how many times I tell myself I won't be here long,
Every hope,
Shows how many times I say I'll cope,
Every moment,
Shows how many times I've reached the summit,
Every day,
Shows how many times I'd wish myself away,
Every page,
Shows how many times I'm in rage,
Every blink,
Shows how many times I can't think,
Everytime,
Shows how many times I've told myself I'm not a crime,
Every hit,
Shows how many times I've put up with shit,
Every boy,
Shows how many times I've been played like a toy,
Every burn,
Shows how many times I wish my life would churn,
Every plague,
Shows how many times I'm vague,
Every stain,
Shows how many times I'm in pain,
Every perfection,
Shows how many times I've been called upon without protection,
Every night,
Shows how many times I've had frights,
Every tide,
Shows how many times I've yet to hide,
Every trait,
Shows how many times I've given up on human faith,
Everywhere,
Shows how many times I've wanted to be up there,
Every face,
Shows how many times I feel out of place,
Every head,
Shows how many times I've leaked red,
Every rain,
Shows how many times I've felt too much pain,
Every surface,
Shows how many times I've had razor kissed wrists,
Every fall,
Shows how many times I wish to be nothing at all,
Every breath,
Shows how many times I've wanted death,
Every crippled,
Shows how many times my blood has trickled,
Every knife,
Shows how many times I've wanted to take my life,
Every cry,
Shows how many times I've asked myself why,
Every place,
Shows how many gashes I've taken to the face,
Every laugh,
Shows how may times I've wanted to drown myself in the bath,
Every brigade,
Shows how many memories I've made,
Every strife,
Shows how many times I've shortened my life,
Every regret,
Shows how many times I've fret,
Every plan,
Shows how many times I've had a shaken hand,
Every vein,
Shows how many times I'm in pain,
Every mess,
Shows how many times I've felt like less,
Every silence,
Shows how many times I've become too violent,
Every book,
Shows how many times I've gotten dirty looks,
Every lesson,
Show how many times I've paid attention,
Every touch,
Shows you that I'm nothing much,
Every lack,
Shows how many times I've wanted to take a step back,
Every mind,
Shows how many times I've tried too hard to get by,
Every eye,
Shows how many times I haven't tried,
Every freak,
Shows how many times I've felt weak,
Every hate,
Shows how many times I do not feel great,
Every corpse,
Shows how many times my life gets worse,
Every friend,
Shows how many times my life has almost come to an end,
Every sea,
Shows how many times I've thought what will become of me,
Every floor,
Shows how many times I've wanted to not be here anymore,
Every break,
Shows how many times for my life I planned to take,
Every scream,
Show how many times I thought I was in a dream,
Every light,
Shows how many times I've told myself that I won't be alright,
Every smile,
Shows how many times I've cried,
Every reflection,
Shows how many times I've called myself imperfection,
Every answer,
Shows how many times I've called myself a stranger,
Every mirror,
Shows how many ties I've felt horror,
Every bruise,
Show how many times I've been abused,
Every fault,
Shows how many times I've wanted to restart,
Every fib,
Shows how many thing I've did,
Every ground,
Shows how many times I've been told I shouldn't be around,
Every fool,
Shows how many times I've been used like a tool',
Every gold,
Shows how many times I've left a story untold,
Every shadow,
Shows how many times my heart has been left hollow,
Every soul'
Shows how many times I've kept stories bold,
Every sin,
Shows how many times I wished that I didn't begin,
Every pace,
Shows how many times I've wished for a prettier face,
Every contemplation,
Shows how many times I've had accusations,
Everything,
To me means nothing.

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by emochikk on 12-11-2007 2:18 pm

sry it's so long... Embarassed

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by xsomexwhatxsanex on 12-11-2007 2:29 pm

DUDE!
i loved that <3
it's amazinggg.

i really like the first line.
it's my favorite. =)

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by Eliot on 12-11-2007 3:57 pm

i realy like it its great...write some more...

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