my life
is just one large crushing weight
a crushing weight shrouded in a smile
a happy facade
and a life-time of personal lies
As i try to shift the crushing weight
from my back
it clings on harder
when i try to forget it
it whispers in my head
my flaws
my shortcomings
my crimes
my life
is shrouded in lies
lies in my smiles
lies in my eyes
lies in my facade
my movements
my life
my life is misery
is a life
a life of misery
a life of deception
a life of
misery
this one is influenced....by my life
emokids poems input would be nice
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emokids poems input would be nice
by emokid696 on 08-27-2008 8:52 pm
[my life is just a crushing weight of pain and fear shrouded in a humorous smile a happy facade and a life-time of personal lies]
"feel the wrath of Canadian lumber fools!!!"
"hey is that a tavern
no that is a cow
im pretty sure thats a tavern mike
its not a tavern
mike can you make believe for 3 seconds that that cow is tavern"
UNFORGOTTEN REALMS
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/unforgotten-realms/49-Episode-One-The-Remaking-of-Heroes
"feel the wrath of Canadian lumber fools!!!"
"hey is that a tavern
no that is a cow
im pretty sure thats a tavern mike
its not a tavern
mike can you make believe for 3 seconds that that cow is tavern"
UNFORGOTTEN REALMS
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/unforgotten-realms/49-Episode-One-The-Remaking-of-Heroes
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by emokid696 on 09-02-2008 3:43 pm
my love poem 
i forfeit for you
my blood my body
my life
its all yours when you need it
but my soul
is for you to keep
forever
i forfeit for you
my blood my body
my life
its all yours when you need it
but my soul
is for you to keep
forever
[my life is just a crushing weight of pain and fear shrouded in a humorous smile a happy facade and a life-time of personal lies]
"feel the wrath of Canadian lumber fools!!!"
"hey is that a tavern
no that is a cow
im pretty sure thats a tavern mike
its not a tavern
mike can you make believe for 3 seconds that that cow is tavern"
UNFORGOTTEN REALMS
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/unforgotten-realms/49-Episode-One-The-Remaking-of-Heroes
"feel the wrath of Canadian lumber fools!!!"
"hey is that a tavern
no that is a cow
im pretty sure thats a tavern mike
its not a tavern
mike can you make believe for 3 seconds that that cow is tavern"
UNFORGOTTEN REALMS
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/unforgotten-realms/49-Episode-One-The-Remaking-of-Heroes
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by emokid696 on 09-27-2008 5:28 pm
my life is but a crushing shadow
enveloped in fear, agony and self doubt
so heavy i can barely move
barely live
my life is but a dying candle
small weak and pathetic
no friends
no parents
as i sit there
enveloped in my shadow of fear, doubt and pain
i wonder
when my grave will be dug
because truly i am already
dead
enveloped in fear, agony and self doubt
so heavy i can barely move
barely live
my life is but a dying candle
small weak and pathetic
no friends
no parents
as i sit there
enveloped in my shadow of fear, doubt and pain
i wonder
when my grave will be dug
because truly i am already
dead
[my life is just a crushing weight of pain and fear shrouded in a humorous smile a happy facade and a life-time of personal lies]
"feel the wrath of Canadian lumber fools!!!"
"hey is that a tavern
no that is a cow
im pretty sure thats a tavern mike
its not a tavern
mike can you make believe for 3 seconds that that cow is tavern"
UNFORGOTTEN REALMS
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/unforgotten-realms/49-Episode-One-The-Remaking-of-Heroes
"feel the wrath of Canadian lumber fools!!!"
"hey is that a tavern
no that is a cow
im pretty sure thats a tavern mike
its not a tavern
mike can you make believe for 3 seconds that that cow is tavern"
UNFORGOTTEN REALMS
http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/unforgotten-realms/49-Episode-One-The-Remaking-of-Heroes
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RE: emokids poems input would be nice
by vinzone on 09-28-2008 3:50 pm
cool! keep it up...
His clumsy, stupid and lunk-headed idiot.
But no one defies the odds like him.
Everytime someone expect him to fail,
He proves them wrong.
His name is NARUTO...
"Be stronger than Yesterday"
~Rock Lee~
BEWARE SHES MY WIFEY!
~becRAWR~
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RE: emokids poems input would be nice
by PunkRockAngel4Life on 09-28-2008 3:57 pm
I really like it.
Nice job.
I can't wait to see more from you
Nice job.
I can't wait to see more from you
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by ZRC on 09-28-2008 5:55 pm
Wait, no wait. All you're talking about is your so called "miserable life." What uh...what? You know poetry is all about expression, right? I doubt you're expressing much more over trying to conform to a set of cliches. Seriously. They had good bone structure, but bones do not move without muscles. You had to build on it, which you didn't. Also for those saying "omg I leik this lulz"...have you ever even taken a poetry class let alone read an actual poem by like E.E. Cummings or Nathaniel Hawthorne? It don't seem like it.
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