echoes

echoes

by xXVickiXx on 07-08-2008 7:32 pm

wispering roses..what now
theres noone to comfort all of pains
and the people of my heart name me the enemy
all i want is to be loved, to be held,
to be needed, but hollow is my soul
and needles pierce my eyes...

were all falling down
nowhere to run....the shallow
hearts of those around me bring me
to my knees in humbleness
but they tear me to pieces
with thier minds and mine is
killin me to see them suffer
they kill themselves... i cant save them
im failing...i must escape please save me
from this pit of coals and flames
im scared, i need salvation.


im going to hope for you,
for you to save me....
save me from myself......im dying
help me, listen to my screams... pleaze help me,
you see my needs take advantage.... i love you
but please dont leave me, take me in your arms
keep me close to your heart.
i hear it beat faster and faster when my cold lips touch yours.


you must see me suffer,
all the hate i have ever felt is now
dissapated in this pit of dispair now
pull me up to stand on my own feet
pull me towards the light where
i can breathe on my own
and see on my own...
is this all you have to offer.
i gladly take you back,
please use me and break me
from my arrogance this,
blind hearted fool needs broken.
This spring of love, resembles the uncertain glory of an April day

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by XLuLLiEX on 07-08-2008 7:34 pm

i like it Very Happy

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by xXVickiXx on 07-08-2008 7:38 pm

XLuLLiEX wrote: i like it Very Happy

thanks
This spring of love, resembles the uncertain glory of an April day

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by bloodchild on 07-09-2008 12:14 am

good job! I love it. you are a VERY good writer. :]

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by brknwings333 on 07-24-2008 1:08 am

wow, it was simply magnificent. i loved it.
death is my protection

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wow

by emochick2013 on 07-24-2008 1:13 am

i LOVE this poem this poem is like the best ive read so far keep writing i love your poems!

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