</3Poetry from the Loveless Poet...Plz comment</3

I dont know if this is any good but.....

Cant stand on your own two feet anymore.
Let it all out. Scream your desire.
Wanting more.
The fire in your eyes search.
Begging for forgiveness.
Wanting approval.
You've gone too far.
You can't change what you've done.
Everyone knows your secret.
Try to deny it. It will come back stronger.
You can't stop your desire. You need it.
It's an addiction. Your drug.
Without it you can't live.
But it's gone. You're slowly dying.
No one can hear you scream.
No one's even listening.
You lied to them too many times.
They can no longer trust you.
You fall down, dying. Choking on your own spit.
Gasping for breath, withdrawls set in.
Everything gets fuzzy, then the world goes black.
You better pray someone's watching over you.
Cuz they're your only chance of surviving now...

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too many times youve ignored me
beat me and scarred me
yet i kept returning
because i loved you
i know its wrong
but i couldnt leave
i wanted to help
but you just pushed me away
you never loved me, even when you say you did
i knew the truth, yet i still stayed
because i cared
because i was foolish
foolish to see the demon inside of you
the demon that scarred me without a second thought
that beat me until my heart bled through my chest
until my body gave out from the tension of trying to stay up
until my very soul cried out for mercy
but i held it in because i didnt want you to think i was weak
all this pain i feel inside
its killing me, mentally and physically
its ripping me apart
its tearing out my heart
soon there wont be anything left to abuse
and you will get your wish
too bad you never heard any of mine...

Mod note: from now on, please put all of your poems under one thread. Entitle it like "Loveless Poet's Poems" or some such. If you make that thread, I'll condense your previous poem threads into that one.

So sad so melencholy i really enjoyed it, your words are very impowering I hope you keep up with peotry

thanx. i used to have a whole other poetry thread on my other account but i stopped going on it. it was black rose is dead. ill have to find the thread and make a new one with some of my best poems. *^_^*

This is the first poem that i made that im extremely proud of...
The Pain I Have Created

isolated in my room
i sit in devoted silence
staring out my rain stricken window
i think of all the violence

the world has created
throughout all the years
i can't help but count
all the blood drops and tears

that stain the ground
and mark a place
where life once was
i hide my face

i can't think about it
it won't go away
im dead inside
i've lost my way

and as the rain slows down
i can finally see
that all of this pain
was created by me

I thought you loved me.
I thought you cared.
But you left me all alone.
In the dark, I'm scared.
Which is really wierd.
Cuz I love the dark.
It makes me feel safe.
Like my own Noah's Ark.
But that Ark has broken.
Flooded and tipped.
You took away my heart.
And returned it ripped.
So now as I hold my bleeding heart.
I don't show my fears.
But they come forth anyhow.
As I'm choking back tears.....

The life you've destroyed
is more than I can ever forgive of you.
You were trusted with a special thing.
Something more special than yourself.
Something that can never be replaced.
Something that will haunt you forever now that it's done.
You were trusted with a special gift.
And you ruined it.
You used it the wrong way, like a toy.
Well toys don't have the ability to destroy a person on the inside like the gift does.
The gift is something special you see.
Something that can give you immense power over yourself.
Your self-control and self-awareness start to bleed out.
It starts to crack and fall.
But you just keep ignoring the gift.
The end of you will be soon if you continue this.
The end of everything will soon follow,
Because you are its soul keeper.
You are the only one left to watch over the gift.
You are the only one who has survived the accident who will even stand a chance of protecting the gift.
Even if you fail, the gift will live on.
Just in an alternate form.
Darkness will fall upon the land as if a giant black sheet has landed on all that lives.
And you humans have diminished your protectives, and you will fall victim to its decietfulness.

Alone

As I walk these lonely streets at night,
I try not to think of you.
I try not to remember how you saved me from myself.
I try to forget when we shared dreams.
I just wish they would all go away.
But they remain burned in my memory, forever.
I wish I would've never met you.
If so, all of this would've never happened.
But now you're gone, and I'm alone.
It starts to rain and I start to cry.
Why would you leave me?
Where are you?
If you can hear my thoughts,
like you could so many times before,
I just want to say...
I love you...

You want me to die...

We used to laugh,
We used to play.
But now those days
Have gone away.

I don't know how.
I don't know why.
I can't help but feel
You want me to die.

These thoughts you've made,
They run through your mind.
Well I guess there's one thing
You will not find.

Me hanging from a tree,
Me bleeding on the floor.
I will not sacrifice my life
For you anymore.

Those thoughts you think,
You want them real.
But ask yourself,
Is that how you really feel?

I know you want
To see me go.
To see me dying
in the snow.

It always was
your favorite thing
To give me hell
with pain you bring.

Well now I'm done.
I'll end this game.
It's your time to feel
What I feel the same.

So with this blade
I seal your fate.
You say you're sorry,
But it's too late...

smiling skies
they look down at me.
i try to hide my face
but the sun still reaches it.
i cant stand it anymore.
the days we shared together
are now just sweet memories.
the times we used to love
used to hang out in the sun.
but now everytime that sun touches my skin
it burns
reminding me of you...

Scream...

Scream to the heavens!
Scream that your heart is breaking!
Scream till you feel your throat rupture!
Till you start coughing up blood!
Scream till you know someone's heard you!
Scream till you know someone's coming to help you!
Scream your very desires!
Scream till you cant scream anymore!
Scream till your heart shatters!
Till you know no one's coming!
Scream till you know it's no use!
Scream your last words!
Scream...
Till you know you're soul has screamed your very last breath...

So meaningful i enjoyed it hope you keep it up =)

thanks. at least somebody does.lol i was starting to think they were gonna go unnoticed.lol

Ur welcome =)