i found ur body laying on the floor,
ur blood seeping through ur clothes.
no-body really cares that ur dead.
bcuz im the only one that knows.
i look into ur life-less eyes,
and there colored black and blue.
and i clean the knife i used..
and lay it next to u.
im crying now,
the pain i cant bare.
im gunna miss ur evil stare,
but then i wake-up..
it was all a dream,
but i wish sum-how it hadnt been.
this one i made up on the spot in about 5 mins so yer..i spose its pretty good for the time i wrote it in...plz tell me wot u think...
Dead -- dedicated to my selfish stepdad who raped me...
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Dead -- dedicated to my selfish stepdad who raped me...
by bloodred on 01-06-2008 8:29 pm
i want u to noe,
i love u.
i want u to hear,
i love u.
i want u to feel tht,
i love.
i love u.
i want u to hear,
i love u.
i want u to feel tht,
i love.
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by bangBANGbangxx on 01-06-2008 8:40 pm
i really like it
and i'm sorry if that happened
same thing happened but with my dad..
ugh
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by AxGIRLxCALLxKILL on 01-06-2008 10:06 pm
Its Really good!
*Hugs you tightly*
I am sorry
*Hugs you tightly*
I am sorry
"Some say I'm disturbed
But it's what I deserve, another lesson
To be learned...from a girl called kill"
But it's what I deserve, another lesson
To be learned...from a girl called kill"
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by xxfallfrominfamyxx on 01-07-2008 1:58 am
OMG! And you think mine is good!! That is very good!! Bravo!! 
Two thumbs up (I would put more up but I only have two!) *hugs*
Two thumbs up (I would put more up but I only have two!) *hugs* -
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by bloodred on 01-07-2008 2:27 am
aaw fanks all of u
unfortuanatly it did hapen to me and i hope it never hapens to me agen...
if it hapened to ne one else aswell...i feel ur pain..
unfortuanatly it did hapen to me and i hope it never hapens to me agen...
if it hapened to ne one else aswell...i feel ur pain..
i want u to noe,
i love u.
i want u to hear,
i love u.
i want u to feel tht,
i love.
i love u.
i want u to hear,
i love u.
i want u to feel tht,
i love.
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bloodred - Almost Emo
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