Crying Rain - Poem

Crying Rain - Poem

by razors sweet kiss on 10-03-2009 8:16 am

Crying Rain


Pitter patter sounds as the rain falls down
There he is, his head hanging low.
Nobody knows if it's his tears or the rain,
That pour down his cheeks again and again.
All they know is that he stands there,cold and alone.
Outside the entrance to his broken home.
Another yell pierces the night,
as yet again his parents resume their fight.
Among the noise and commotion no-one sees him go,
Head bent down,hands in pockets, slow
To leave but determined to go......

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by DyInG In CrImSoN nIgHtMaR on 10-04-2009 4:25 pm

i like how u use the "i like walking through the rain, no one can tell i'm crying." thing it's good.

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by DyInG In CrImSoN nIgHtMaR on 10-04-2009 4:26 pm

i like how u use the "i like walking through the rain, no one can tell i'm crying." thing it's good.

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by DyInG In CrImSoN nIgHtMaR on 10-04-2009 4:26 pm

i like how u use the "i like walking through the rain, no one can tell i'm crying." thing it's good.

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by ladyred20 on 10-09-2009 9:20 pm

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by ladyred20 on 10-13-2009 2:39 am

ur poem is really good

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by saya563 on 10-16-2009 5:25 pm

your poem is really good i like the ending..

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RE: Crying Rain - Poem

by xxxantisocialxxx on 10-18-2009 3:15 am

luv rain poems Smile

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by xXMyChemicalSleepXx on 10-18-2009 2:21 pm

beautiful mate. bloody beautiful. Smile

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RE: Crying Rain - Poem

by ZoesLover on 10-18-2009 2:30 pm

Butthurt over another emow stealing yur bitch?

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