confused

confused

by happyemo7 on 07-22-2008 11:30 am

oh my!
I love them both, can't have them both.
It's tearing me apart!
My former joy and present boy:
Both have got my heart. I have to choose, so I must lose
Someone I really love.
It feels like dirt that I must hurt
A guy that I dream of. Why this must be I cannot see;
I only know I must.
Each might endure, for I am sure
That this is love, not lust. I weep and wail to no avail;
I can't say no to either.
But if I can't tell what I want,
Could that mean I want neither?
since you left me,
i've lost track of time,
i cant do anything right,
i feel nothing but pain...

i am dead inside

happyemo7
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by happyemo7 on 07-22-2008 11:56 am

i love reading poems, but im not cut out for writing them
since you left me,
i've lost track of time,
i cant do anything right,
i feel nothing but pain...

i am dead inside

happyemo7
Almost Emo
 
Posts: 45
Joined: 13 Jan 2008
Gender: Female
Location: san antonio, tx

by cloudedbubbles on 07-23-2008 9:46 am

I thought it was really good. It flowed well and it made a lot of sense. I like it!
My heart only hurts when it's beating,
And my mind only screams when I'm thinking.
All I want is to escape my reality.

cloudedbubbles
Fresh Meat
 
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Location: within my clouded bubble

by happyemo7 on 07-23-2008 3:06 pm

thanks
since you left me,
i've lost track of time,
i cant do anything right,
i feel nothing but pain...

i am dead inside

happyemo7
Almost Emo
 
Posts: 45
Joined: 13 Jan 2008
Gender: Female
Location: san antonio, tx


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