Black Heart Down

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Black Heart Down

by crimson heartache534 on 01-05-2008 6:58 pm

As I drop to the floor, my heart beats me to the floor. I lay there, No thoughts, no Regrets,I life i lived for nothing.No cliches to bring me back to reality nothing but A burning sense inside me like A feeding insect tearing my soul.My heart frails under the flames as my eyes bleed the tears i never cried for you...i have yet to see the light, only darkness covers the bright skys leaving me chained to apathetic pain I will never know.....

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by XxXInTooDeepXxX on 01-06-2008 12:57 am

thats a beautiful poem desmond wow. . . you have a talent mann. . . Smile

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by emorach on 01-06-2008 5:07 am

All i can say is wow!That was a beautiful poem.i never knew u had such a talent Des.Well done!XD

Rach..x

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by xXBlankPoloroidXx on 01-06-2008 5:25 am

talented indeed!

Live, Love, Burn, Die...

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by bloodred on 01-06-2008 10:28 am

yes extremely!!...wish i had sumthing like tht to liv for..

i want u to noe,
i love u.
i want u to hear,
i love u.
i want u to feel tht,
i love.

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by crimson heartache534 on 01-06-2008 4:29 pm

hey thanx guys, I guess when im feeling this way all these things come out of me and make a poem that poeple injoy

B.T.W there should be more to come Very Happy