Black Heart Down PT.2

Black Heart Down PT.2

by crimson heartache534 on 01-06-2008 6:29 pm

She tells me all I want to hear, A higher amount of pity than the dark skys covering my destroyed world.We take notice to the many questions & answers life brings us...but then again, life brings more than one can comsume.As I once told myself, you are like the sun and I as the moon, when you go up...I go down..when you are down....I go up, never to conect as one..but only far away never to reach.An undiscribable feeling feasting on my self far more than ever imagianed, i always knew it would come to this...but never to feel nothing..nothing at all.

you think it would make sense when people say "there are more fish in the sea"...well, what if you in the atlantic ocean and shes apart of the pasific ocean...never to reach her


-Desmond

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by XxXInTooDeepXxX on 01-06-2008 6:35 pm

wow... just... wow... you really care about her dont you?

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by crimson heartache534 on 01-06-2008 6:57 pm

i guess i do

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by emorach on 01-06-2008 8:57 pm

Awesome poem des! I told u tht u were good XD
Rach..x

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by crimson heartache534 on 01-07-2008 9:53 am

thanx guys, your a good suport

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