bang and the gun goes off

bang and the gun goes off

by plainoldRachael on 01-06-2008 4:48 pm

any thing that will help to improve... let me know please..... how i feel

my neck bleeds out
I try to shout
it hurts to bad
you're so mad

what did I do?
is it some thing new?
I'm sick of you hurting me
please just let me be

I wish you never came
because you're the one to blame
I am laying in the hospital bed
all i can see is red

you act like you care
this pain I can not bare
leaving brooses
only because I'm the one that loses

you have more power and strength
because you take that extra length
leave me and my family alone
you've broken my last bone

time for you to die
no one will cry
how does it feel to know you're hated?
and to know that I finally made it

you'll be gone
and I'll live on
I'll be safe from you
you dont have a clue

you're dead tonight
you wont see the light
BANG and the gun goes off
the last thing you do is cough

your eyes read fear
and the cops come near
telling me to drop the gun
but I WONT run!

If you're not dead
I'll put bullet in your head
bleed to death already you bastard
DIE FASTER!!

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by xxfallfrominfamyxx on 01-06-2008 5:29 pm

WOW.. I liked it..

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by plainoldRachael on 01-06-2008 5:30 pm

xxfallfrominfamyxx wrote: WOW.. I liked it..


thanks...

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by mel mixedtape on 01-06-2008 5:49 pm

thats rly good

If you're not dead
I'll put bullet in your head

is awesum. angry but awesum Twisted Evil

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