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by iluv3dg on 10-11-2007 4:37 pm

Here's another poem i wrote, pretty crap again but what the hell. Tell me what you think Smile .

My heart hurts,
Through every night and day,
Your name it beats,
Watch my blood spray.

Ripping itself open,
Feelings of you pour out,
Manifesting in my tears,
You are what my life is about.

Burning my veins,
Emotions seep through the holes,
Flowing out of my body,
Destroying the essence of my soul.

When will you come,
And heal all the pain,
Fix up my heart,
Don't let my blood drain.
http://www.emothic.com

So let's take this knife and run it down your chest, does this feel like love? </3


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by bleedsxXxnoxXxmore on 10-11-2007 5:15 pm

i reallyreally like this Smile

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by avien08 on 10-11-2007 9:59 pm

rily luvd it... <33 Smile

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by Sorademon on 10-11-2007 10:29 pm

wow i liked it in the begingign it was bloody
blep..... um ok then.....

oh a picture this seems to be interesting

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by janie123 on 12-01-2007 7:06 pm

thats really good
oh shiddazzles!
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by janie123 on 12-01-2007 7:57 pm

u no ther not he just showed me all his poem he has posted and i added a comment to it
oh shiddazzles!
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