Always staring down.


Staring at that tool in my hand
That tool that caused me pain
That tool in my hand
That tool that caused you pain
That razor in my hand

Staring at the blood in my hand
That blood that i bled
That blood in my hand
That blood you said you loved
That blood hadn't earned your love

Staring at that note in my hand
That note that caused me pain
That note in my hand
That note you wrote before you croaked

Staring at you in that coffin
It should have been me
That coffin where you lay
Where u lay because i used to play with razors



Tell me what u think guys, constructive criticism will be welcomed

it's very nice, I like it...

my best friend went something like this a boy loved her so much he killed himself after she moved becuase he loved her... but I can't convince her that it wasn't her fualt... but yea I really like it it would sound really good as a song I kept singing it lol

thank you

what type of song

not completely sure... I tried it 2 different ways I did it kinda fast like a linkin park song ND i DID IT SLOWER LIKE A SAD SONG BECUASE IT IS SAD i LIKED IT BOTH WAYS

i tottaly love it

it is sad cry lol

I love it ♥

Very nice.

THANKSSSS

its my first one

i like it, it's really good

i really like it.