Here's some stuff I wrote after some serious shit I have been going through lately all these are from the heart. Read and comment them tell me if you like them or you don't.

Do you see the scars upon my heart
From all the times you tore me apart
From all the things you would say
The hate you always sent my way
But the pain is gone
The misery fades
There's nothing left to feel nothing left to say
As the hatred fills my heart like a rushing wave
I'm left like you
Only a shell
Living in my own little hell

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Do you see the hatred in my veins?
Do you see my heart cry out in pain?
Do you see what you have done?
Leaving me alone with my thoughts and a gun?

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I hate myself because I love you
I hate myself because I want to die
I hate myself because when I look you in the eyes
Instead of hating you I just want to cry
I wish I could hate you
So this pain would go away
I wish I could hate you
So all the pain from this love would just float away

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I'm all alone in this sea of pain
I'm all alone in this sea of despair
I'm all alone so you can't see
These tear's that flow so freely

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I can still see the smile on your lip's
I can still see the happiness in your eye's
But I guess that's why it was such a surprise
To see you start to fall
To fall away from me

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Do you believe the smile I let you see
Don't you see there's nothing left of me
Don't you see the pain in my eye's
Don"t you see these tears I hide
I'm crying out for help
I'm crying out for you
Why won"t you save me

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All these masks
There not really me
There to hide were you can't see
All the pain inside of me
All these fears of being alone
All these fears of having no home
All these scars so deep down
From all the times Ive been pushed around
From all the times my hearts been torn
These masks hide my soul
Hide my soul were you can't see
To hide my soul were you can't hurt me

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Its all a charade
All that you see
Its just a charade
To keep you happy
Its just a charade
If you let it be
Its only a charade
So why make sinner's see
What they don't want to see

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Well thats all I have for now so just comment and tell me what you think.

pretty deep stuff.....i write poetry when im mad or depressed but never comes out the way i want to

The trick is don't think just write let your emotions flow heart to hand to pen to paper and it will all work OK then when ure through writing then you can think about it loo,k at it and work out the kinks, that is what I do anyway.

ill try that next time .....thnx