Alone Again

I love haiku poems you can say so much with so few words.

Glorious shadows!
Envelop me now, Darkness.
No light left to shine.

The years first day
thoughts and loneliness;
the autumn dusk is here.

soft carpet of leaves
goodness returns to the soil
but we must fall too

Depressing, the cold.
The pain and sorrow hurts me.
Can I stop the twinge?

Swiftly time passes
Waiting for none, old age comes
As youth comes undone

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Dark haiku's!

Yeah, title needs a little revision but it's not terrible, overall.

My 1st serious attempt at a poem using my own thoughts feelings and experience what do you think ?

Darkness falls
who knows my pain
sitting here
alone again

it ends tonight
cant bear the pain
she broke my heart
my eyes now rain

what did i do
to cause this pain
what didnt i do
im going insane

I cut myself
I need the pain
makes me feel like
she's mine again

one day soon
I may cut too deep
watch the blood
gather at my feet

why does my heart
feel the pain
when im alone
alone again


by Luke

really good, personal even