I made this as a sattire. If you don't know what it is, then I dunno. But know I did this on the fly when I was high. See? I'm already making poetry. Yeah. I should do this now.
raindrops are falling n my head
and I'm screaming now because they're all a shitload of acid
sulfur oxyphosphate
it hurts really bad
and now I'm on FIRRRRRE
raindrops are falling on my head
but now my skin is melting and I'm screaming
praying to the lord
hoping this can end
because I died
Acid Rain. ( social sattire )
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Acid Rain. ( social sattire )
by ZRC on 10-17-2009 1:31 am
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RE: Acid Rain. ( social sattire )
by MelodyOfMalice on 10-23-2009 3:02 am
Almost better than a swearing chicken, good job d00d.
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by stupidemo on 10-23-2009 7:58 am
lol
i think the theme of that poem is awesome
im thinking on writting a poem along similar lines as that
mainly coz im sick of the same themes always being in this forum.
i think the theme of that poem is awesome
im thinking on writting a poem along similar lines as that
mainly coz im sick of the same themes always being in this forum.
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