A Sick Love Story

A Sick Love Story

by CutExxxwithout the E on 01-28-2008 10:53 pm

im new at this so tell me what you think!

I love you
but your trying to leave me
so i cut off your feet
ad you start to cry
"Shhh Shhh, don't cry i love you, this is just a way of showing it"
You spit in my face and call me mean things
So i sew your mouth shut
You try to muffle up a scream but can't
"Oh no, now you should not have done that. it hurt my feelings."
he rolled his eyes
then i kissed them
Before i plucked them out
"Sorry Sorry,I just love you so much. but you hurt me ...bad...now you must feel my pain"
I run my knife down the side of his face
then i kiss the spot that gushes out blood
I free his hands
Only to slit his wrist
I drive my knife through his heart
I lay on him, the blood staining my white dress
"I love you so much, so i shall follow you"
I kiss his wound then i ended myself
love me let me
love u <3
kiss u
touch u
hold u and kill u like u killed me

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Re: A Sick Love Story

by chrishasnofriends on 01-29-2008 12:38 am

CutExxxwithout the E wrote: im new at this so tell me what you think!

I love you
but your trying to leave me
so i cut off your feet
ad you start to cry
"Shhh Shhh, don't cry i love you, this is just a way of showing it"
You spit in my face and call me mean things
So i sew your mouth shut
You try to muffle up a scream but can't
"Oh no, now you should not have done that. it hurt my feelings."
he rolled his eyes
then i kissed them
Before i plucked them out
"Sorry Sorry,I just love you so much. but you hurt me ...bad...now you must feel my pain"
I run my knife down the side of his face
then i kiss the spot that gushes out blood
I free his hands
Only to slit his wrist
I drive my knife through his heart
I lay on him, the blood staining my white dress
"I love you so much, so i shall follow you"
I kiss his wound then i ended myself


Wow.
That's pretty intense.
Good Writing skills.

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